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Looking up to the bright light
She thought and wondered

Is he looking at the same night?
Is he looking at the same stars?
Is he looking at the same moon?
She thought and wondered

The wind blew and took her breath away
The wind blew and took her thought away
The wind blew and took his love away

She chased after it
Desperatly clinging to him
Desperatly wanting him
Wanting him near
Wanting him there
Holding her in his arms

It made her sick
Thinking of him
Knowing it would never happen again
Knowing he would never kiss her again
Never hold her again
Never look at her again

She chased a hopeless dream
And fell
Fell into the night
Into the pitch black night

She wanted help
And none came
She reached out a hand
A hand covered in red blood
The sweet smell flooded her nose
And made her numb

She looked up to the moon
And wondered desperatly
why?
©2007-2010 ~artysanniegirl
:iconartysanniegirl:

Author's Comments

it was a full moon....i started staring at it and it made me think about my bf and how our relationship is pretty much over (tho some people on her already kinda know that) this is pretty much how i feel....

the moons pretty tho...its nice and full with no clouds..u can see the stars too....so its not all bad

*edit* im gonna make this for # 60 on the 100 themes challenge....rejection

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:iconreogi:
Wow...
that's. really good...
*faves*

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“I know that you believe you understand what you think I said, but I'm not sure you realize that what you heard is not what I meant.”
:iconartysanniegirl:
:blush: thanks

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbry-kun:
"She wanted help
And none came"

Guess you kinda forgot about me huh?

But its good poem anyway

--
If time is an illusion, what's my watch?

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October 26, 2007
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