surprisingly this poem (even tho its about death) isnt sad....
this is my true feelings about it...or thinkings about it, however you want to put it....
im just kinda wondering wat happens in the last seconds of life and life after death....
i actually had a meaner poem which is this
Death can appear in many forms
Death of innocence When you learn how the world Really doesnt care
Death of spirit When you just give up Because no one cares
Death of personality When you just dont care About anything
Death of a body When you finally stop wasting space in the world And they shove [drop?] you in a hole underground
Arent we just so kind to the dearly departed?
at least i didnt do that but i mean think about it....when you die they drop u in a hole, say farewell and say *dramatic crying voice* "o its okay sweetie...hes in a better place now".....
lol i know....i WAS gonna make it darker but i decided not to because i had to turn that in for school so i didnt want to seem like i have problems or something and then they would send me to the counceler (sp?)
but still the flower on water is like a classic XD i just didnt have a rose...that woulda been fun to take
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People are like slinkies They are useless But you can't help but smile When you push them down the stairs
lol i know i didn't know we were sharing these and tuning them in... Mrs. Trout is gona like sign me up with a scyshyatrist (sp?) ... even the my "freinds poem is depressing"
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lol jk jk jk jk jk
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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
would have never known it was about death
the irony...lol
lovely
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★ Music is Life. Cliché but True.
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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
but still the flower on water is like a classic XD i just didnt have a rose...that woulda been fun to take
--
People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
--
So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
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★ Music is Life. Cliché but True.
--
People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
--
So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
and which ones did you take from DA? or just load it up like i did
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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
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