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surprisingly this poem (even tho its about death) isnt sad....

this is my true feelings about it...or thinkings about it, however you want to put it....

im just kinda wondering wat happens in the last seconds of life and life after death....

i actually had a meaner poem which is this

Death can appear in many forms

Death of innocence
When you learn how the world
Really doesn’t care

Death of spirit
When you just give up
Because no one cares

Death of personality
When you just don’t care
About anything

Death of a body
When you finally stop wasting space in the world
And they shove [drop?] you in a hole underground

Aren’t we just so kind to the dearly departed?


at least i didnt do that but i mean think about it....when you die they drop u in a hole, say farewell and say *dramatic crying voice* "o its okay sweetie...hes in a better place now".....

........dont hate me please >.>

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i hate you....



lol jk jk jk jk jk

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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
:iconaternity:
love the choice of background and text color
would have never known it was about death
the irony...lol

lovely

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★ Music is Life. Cliché but True.
:iconartysanniegirl:
lol meanie :-P :XD:

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconartysanniegirl:
lol i know....i WAS gonna make it darker but i decided not to because i had to turn that in for school so i didnt want to seem like i have problems or something and then they would send me to the counceler (sp?)

but still the flower on water is like a classic XD i just didnt have a rose...that woulda been fun to take :)

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbluepup90:
lol i know i didn't know we were sharing these and tuning them in... Mrs. Trout is gona like sign me up with a scyshyatrist (sp?) ... even the my "freinds poem is depressing"

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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
:iconaternity:
HAhahah, I see xD

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★ Music is Life. Cliché but True.
:iconartysanniegirl:
lol urs too? and is she really?

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbluepup90:
idk but ill show you my book ... there basicly some of the ones on DA

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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
:iconartysanniegirl:
HAHAHA actually my loneliness one was from previous...i just edited it a lil

and which ones did you take from DA? or just load it up like i did

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs

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