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Happy, Joyful, Loving
Things people act like everyday of their life
But
That’s just it!
They ACT!

They may seem like it,
All happy and everything
But what's really going on in their life
What are they really feeling?
Really thinking

No one knows
Because they wear a barrier of LIES!
They betray their own feelings!
They make themselves alone in the world
Or at least
Their emotions

How hurt must that person be?
Having to lie day after day after day
Just to keep their sanity
And what about when they go home?
What do they do to get rid of the pain?

Cut, burn,
Play the choking game?
Why must someone go through that
All because another person caused it?

And is that person who caused it considered to be a monster?
Pht probably not
But
What if
What if they did it
On purpose?
Like the monster they are

Ruining someone else’s sanity
Just because
WHAT!?
They don’t like the person anymore!?
They heard a rumor!?
They saw something that they laughed at!?
Seems like a stupid reason
To kill someone on the inside out

Don’t you think?
©2007-2010 ~artysanniegirl
:iconartysanniegirl:

Author's Comments

okayz wellz.....dont ask how i got the inspiration for this (yes theirs some...needed some anger to get out) but i just started writting and it just kinda flowed (lol) i guess.

this is really meant to be spoken tho its not spoken word but the changes in like voice and stress areas and such....theres no rythym to it tho lol.....

if u do notice...it goes from depressed to questioning to anger and that....

i tried to write it from someone else's point of view from where they feel sad for the person to where they realize that the person is a total ****er...

sooo.....yeah.....if u got anything u wanna add to this or something i can fix let me know....this is one of the rare poems i want to actually read outloud but i dont wanna be called emo for it ^^;

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:iconbry-kun:
Stoleded your comment virginity! o.O

I like it. I wonder where the inspiration came from though. Srsly. I do wonder.

=P Good job.

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If time is an illusion, what's my watch?
:iconartysanniegirl:
lol....do u think i should actually say this to u....its more....better (to me anyways) if i speak it lol

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbry-kun:
Lol I'd think you were yelling at me for something I did and I'd feel bad xD

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If time is an illusion, what's my watch?
:iconartysanniegirl:
HAHHAHAH ill give u a warning....plus....i didnt memorize it and its not like im actually yelling

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbry-kun:
I know. I'm teasing :P I think it'd sound interesting though

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If time is an illusion, what's my watch?
:iconartysanniegirl:
kk back to IM now :)

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbry-kun:
Yeah you better run!

--
If time is an illusion, what's my watch?
:iconartysanniegirl:
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!


:sleep:

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People are like slinkies
They are useless
But you can't help but smile
When you push them down the stairs
:iconbry-kun:
Love you Angie Baby

--
If time is an illusion, what's my watch?

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